Wednesday, March 14, 2012

Clash of the Titles

Although I’ve been largely inactive on this blog during the past couple months, I’ve not been inactive in life or my writing.

One of the latest things I’ve been involved in is a blog called Clash of the Titles. This blog takes two excerpts, usually from published novels, and posts them anonymously. Then readers vote on their favorite.

Clash of The Titles

During the past two weeks, I’ve been privileged to participate in a clash for unpublished speculative novels.

Though the voting is now closed, I encourage you jump over and have a look. You can find the excerpts here and the book summaries here. I’m the second excerpt, but take the time to read J.D. Warren’s excerpt as well—it’s quite impressive.

Also today my interview with COTT posted. You can find that here.

Anyway, have a look around, not only at my clash, but also at the other things they are doing at COTT. It’s a very fun concept for both writer and reader.

Tuesday, February 21, 2012

The Realms Thereunder

Title: The RealmsThereunder

Series: The Ancient Earth Trilogy #1

Author: Ross Lawhead

Genre: Adult Supernatural Suspense

Excerpt from Chapter One of The Realms Thereunder:

Daniel Tully sat unmoving and unnoticed—just another gargoyle on Broad Street. A paper cup in front of him held fifty-six pence in small coins and there were two pounds in his pocket. That means either a proper meal or a bed in the night shelter. He really wanted both.  He could try blagging his way into the homeless cafĂ©—the Gatehouse—even though he was too young at only twenty years old. That would give him a meal and he could buy the bed and keep the fifty-six pence for tomorrow.

"Spare change, mate?" he asked a pair of business trousers.

The legs continued without breaking stride. Two other pairs of legs coming the other way stopped in front of him and he looked up. 

Two girls, students, stood in front of him and one of them was digging around in her purse. She hastily fished out a couple coins—her friend gazing sourly at her all the while—and dropped them into his cup.

An Oxford student and a man living off the streets are pulled into an increasing threat from not-so-mythical realms.

Craft: The Realms Thereunder felt . . . disappointing. Perhaps the cover and the backcover copy, which the author has no control over, are at fault. But a thrilling, action-packed adventure seemed to be promised, and instead I found a story that I could put down at whim.

It’s not the writing was poor. The prose itself is smooth and has a nice cadence. The premise blends the mythical and real in an intriguing fashion. Colorful descriptions bring to life complex worlds, and the characters seem fairly fleshed out. But the plot seems to wander about, as lost as the protagonists themselves.

Maybe this is because The Realms Thereunder  appears to be a set-up book. Nonetheless, the story lacked tension and drive. While the backstory held great potential, the existence of the contemporary story drains the tension as it eliminates any uncertainty about the outcome, even if the exact specifics are unknown. Meanwhile, the contemporary story wanders without clear purpose or goal; many of the scenes felt repetitious, fillers that added nothing new to the story. Add to this the lack of clear stakes/character goals and protagonists that seem passive rather than active, and the result is a plot that drifts along.

So though the premise intrigues and the prose is vivid, the story fails, at least for me, to hold the attention for any length of time.

Content: Not so differently from the plot, the content of The Realms Thereunder felt underdeveloped. It hints at some story themes about deception, bravery, and God’s timing versus man’s timing, but they never come to fruition. Is this because the novel is a set-up story? Is this because there wasn’t much character growth (which tends to be intertwined with theme development)? Or is it due to some other factor? That I’m not sure.

Beyond this, there’s a fair amount of magical and supernatural elements, but seems appropriately handled for the most part. Also, there is some violence, not graphically portrayed as a whole, and some British swearing.

Summary: The Realms Thereunder is an okay read, especially if approached with the awareness that the story is not high on tension. In short, it’s not a novel you should go out of your way to find, but worth a passing read if you happen upon it.

Ratings: Craft—3, Content—3, Overall—3.3 out of 5 stars

Disclaimer: In conjunction with the CSFF Blog Tour, I received a free copy of this book from the publisher.

February Tour

Another Christian Sci-fi and Fantasy Tour has arrived. We're looking at The Realms Thereunder by Ross Lawhead.

Here are this month's participants:

Gillian Adams
Red Bissell
Keanan Brand
Beckie Burnham
Melissa Carswell
Jeff Chapman
CSFF Blog Tour
Theresa Dunlap
Emmalyn Edwards
April Erwin
Victor Gentile
Tori Greene
Nikole Hahn
Ryan Heart
Bruce Hennigan
Timothy Hicks
Christopher Hopper
Jason Joyner
Carol Keen
Krystine Kercher
Rebekah Loper
Marzabeth
Shannon McDermott
Rebecca LuElla Miller
Mirriam Neal
Eve Nielsen
Nissa
John W. Otte
Donita K. Paul
Joan Nienhuis
Crista Richey
Sarah Sawyer
Kathleen Smith
Donna Swanson
Rachel Starr Thomson
Steve Trower
Fred Warren
Dona Watson
Shane Werlinger
Nicole White
Rachel Wyant

Monday, December 19, 2011

Winning the War--But At What Cost?

During the past week, I spotted a headline on the internet that read something like, “Christians Winning War on Christmas.” The article was about the battle with stores over “Merry Christmas” versus “Happy Holidays.”

Many Christians would rejoice over the stats cited, I’m sure. When I saw the article, though, sadness washed over me. Maybe we are winning—and will win—this so-called war. But at what cost?

Don’t get me wrong. I agree this battle symbolizes the deterioration of our society and emphasizes how our culture wants to remove Jesus Christ from the culture. But isn’t that really all it is—a Symbol? In view of eternity, does it matter if an employee wishes me Merry Christmas” or a store displays “Happy Holidays? (Which, by the way, refers to Holy Days, and aren’t we Christians celebrating the holiest and happiest ones of all?)

More and more the issue seems cosmetic. A surface problem that points to a deeper one and that will solve itself when that deeper problem is resolved. So why are we spending so much time and effort and money over this? May not such attention to the outward ultimately cause greater damage to the inward?

If this war points back to Christ being removed from the culture, wouldn’t it be better to focus on putting Christ back into the hearts of men rather than just in their mouths?

“For out of the overflow of the heart the mouth speaks.” Matthew 12:34, NIV

So Merry Christmas!

Tuesday, October 25, 2011

The Bone House

Title: The Bone House
Series: Bright Empires #2


Genre: Adult alternate-reality sci-fi

Excerpt from “Chapter 1, In Which Some Things Are Best Forgotten,” of The Bone House:

From a snug in the corner of the Museum Tavern, Douglas Flinders-Petrie dipped a sop of bread into the gravy of his steak and kidney pudding and watched the entrance to the British Museum across the street. The great edifice was dark, the building closed to the public for over three hours. The employees had gone home, the charwomen had finished their cleaning, and the high iron gates were locked behind them. The courtyard was empty and, outside the gates, there were fewer people on the street now than an hour ago. He felt no sense of urgency: only keen anticipation, which he savoured as he took another draught of London Pride. He had spent most of the afternoon in the museum, once more marking the doors and exits, the blind spots, the rooms where a person might hide and remain unseen by the night watchmen, of which there were but three to cover the entire acreage of the sprawling institution.

Douglas knew from his researches that at eleven each night the head watchman retired to his office on the ground floor to make tea. He would be duly joined by his two underling guards, and the three would enter their observations in the logbook and then spend an enjoyable thirty minutes drinking their tea, eating pies, and exchanging gossip.

While they were thus occupied, he would strike.

Two modern Londoners chase a map through multiple historical dimensions.

The Craft: For me, The Bone House was a mixed read.

While I enjoyed the novel, the plot seemed to take an unusually long time to hook me. It was almost halfway into the story before I was eager to learn what happened next. At any time preceding that, I could have walked away without regret, unconcerned about the characters’ fate. Considering this is book two, such low emotional investment in the characters is somewhat alarming.

The plot’s meandering feel, mixed with minor confusion over some of the timelines, also impeded progress. Some scenes, though probably needed, felt irrelevant at the time of reading and lacked good bridging tension. In addition, the different storylines, which I assume are all necessary, seem to have only peripheral bearing on each other at a time I fully expected their interconnection to start becoming apparent.

But beyond this, the writing was good. The huge cast of characters, which challenge the most expert writers, is well delineated. The historical worlds are vividly drawn—a Lawhead specialty that will not disappoint in this book. The prose please the ear, and the plot continues to have some intriguing twists.

The Content: As often happens, the content mirrors the craft—The Bone House again presents a mixed bag.

The Bone House doesn’t carry much by way of thematic material, which felt a little unusual even for a Lawhead novel. Of course, I may have simply missed them in the midst of the story. There were a couple interesting discussions on death and mortality, man’s craving for immortality, and man as a living soul. I fully expect to see these topics further expanded in the future.

However, on the negative side, I did have some unease with how some elements were handled. The whole piece with cavemen/primitive man felt distorted, although I cannot pinpoint the exact reasons for my mixed reactions to that.

But perhaps more concerning were the scenes involved in the Egyptian foretelling. While such rituals did take place and the characters appear to have no reason for them not to get involved, these kinds of acts are forbidden in Scripture. Therefore, in a Christian novel, I would fully expected those acts to be ultimately seen in a negative light. But thus far there have been no negative repercussions and it could even be construed that such rituals are being put forth as harmless, if not outright helpful.

As a result, this content require discernment and some caution should be applied.

Summary: The Bone House didn’t seem to quite live up to the standard I have come to expect from a Stephen Lawhead novel, containing both positive and negative points in craft and content.  I would not recommend it for teens under sixteen or new Christians. Otherwise, it is an interesting, take-it-or-leave-it story, though those who like both science-fiction and historicals may greatly enjoy this book.

Ratings: Craft—4, Content—3, Overall—3.8 out of 5 stars

Monday, October 24, 2011

October CSFF Tour

Another month, another Christian Sci-Fi and Fantasy tour. This week we're featuring the second book in Stephen Lawhead's Bright Empires series. Meshing science fiction's multiple dimensions with a historical feel, The Bone House is a unique read midst the world of Christian science-fiction.

I will be posting a review soon, but in the meantime, check out my fellow tour members and their opinions:

Noah Arsenault, Red Bissell, Thomas Clayton Booher, Beckie Burnham, Morgan L. Busse, CSFF Blog Tour, Jeff Chapman, Carol Bruce Collett , Karri Compton, D. G. D. Davidson, Theresa Dunlap, April Erwin, Victor Gentile, Tori Greene, Ryan Heart, Bruce Hennigan, Timothy Hicks, Christopher Hopper, Janeen Ippolito, Becca Johnson, Jason Joyner, Julie, Carol Keen, Krystine Kercher, Marzabeth, Katie McCurdy, Shannon McDermott, Rebecca LuElla Miller, Joan Nienhuis, Kathleen Smith, Donna Swanson, Rachel Starr Thomson, Robert Treskillard, Steve Trower, Fred Warren, Phyllis Wheeler, Nicole White, Rachel Wyant

Monday, October 17, 2011

Determining My Priorities

In my world, time is a precious commodity.

Like talent and intelligence, time is a gift from God given in set amounts, and while all these things can be wasted, none of them can be manufactured. We can only use what we’ve been given.

My problem is that have many interests in a wide variety of areas, each of which requires a substantial amount of time to maintain, much less actually improve at. As a result, I have been forced to determine again where it is best for me to focus.

One of the decisions facing me is how best to divide my writing time. Long projects and short pieces vie for my attention. Both fiction and nonfiction are on my writing wish list. But I cannot do all things at the same time. So what is it I really want to do?

The answer came back the same as it did almost eleven years ago: Write novels.

The realms of the imaginary have long been a passion. To expand reader’s horizons, to open unseen realms, to allow them to experience the fantastic in a way that will challenge them to see this world differently—this has long been my heart.

The types of stories I envision, however, do not come easily or effortlessly, even after ten years of practice. If anything, the process has become more complex, demanding, and complicated. In short, more time-consuming.

So I must cut back to keep doing what I love, and this blog shall see some of those cuts. For I am convinced that, at this point, focusing on creating a finely crafted novel will far exceed a split of my efforts, which will result at the moment in mediocre blogs and mediocre books.

Therefore in the coming weeks, this blog shall change. All the ways are yet unknown to me. Fewer posts, for sure. Perhaps a change in content or focus too. I’m not sure. But I am first a novelist. Novelists write novels. And this is what I intend to do.